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amanengone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 187 W: 54 N: 412] (2113) [2016-12-18 2:14] - [workshop] [compare]

Hello Ishi – Very good picture of this Narcissus tarzzetta. Excellent, view showing us all the details of the flower, coralla and androecium. Colours of the flower properly caught. Many details perceptible.

Technical achievement

• Good focus on the flowers
• Perfect exposure with an appropriate choice of aperture/speed and iso speed rating for the flowers
• Acceptable depth of field and sharpness
• Acceptable contrast
• Acceptable sharpness showing many the details of the flowers and their morphology; maybe could you have improve the sharpness through a different lens aperture/speed and iso speed rating. An alternative could be to improve the sharpness and contrast through the post treatment; I propose you a workshop
• Precise white balance and exact colour rendering
• Good post processing without any excess
• Good background blur

Impact

• Interesting picture showing the flowers; good capture of this Narcissus.
• Good presentation with simplicity. Maybe could have it be better to remove the “extra flowers” from the background
• Efficient framing and composition with an appropriate disposition in the centre of the frame.
• Regarding your different POV, I prefer Altered image #1

Thank you for the sharing.

Have a good day.

Philippe

amanengone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 187 W: 54 N: 412] (2113) [2016-12-18 1:41] - [workshop] [compare]

Hello Ishi – Very good picture of this Colchicum stevenii. Excellent, view showing us all the details of the flower, coralla and androecium. Colours of the flower properly caught. Many details perceptible.

Technical achievement

• Good focus on the flowers
• Perfect exposure with an appropriate choice of aperture/speed and iso speed rating for the flowers
• Acceptable depth of field and sharpness
• Good contrast
• Acceptable sharpness showing many the details of the flowers and their morphology; maybe could you have improve the sharpness through a different lens aperture: instead of f/32, maybe f/12 to f/8 will have be better, depending on the light conditions; if necessary, increasing of the iso speed rating to iso 1000 or more (depending on your camera). An alternative could be to improve the sharpness through the post treatment; I propose you a workshop
• Precise white balance and exact colour rendering
• Good post processing without any excess
• Good background blur

Impact

• Interesting picture showing the flowers; good capture of this Colchicum. Interesting to see the flowers before the foliage of the plant.
• Good presentation with simplicity
• Efficient framing and composition with an appropriate disposition in the centre of the frame.
• Regarding your different POV, I prefer Altered image #1 (view on the side)

Thank you for the sharing.

Have a good day.

Philippe

amanengone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 187 W: 54 N: 412] (2113) [2016-12-05 4:27]

Hello Sri – Very good picture of this Anas undulata. Excellent, view showing us all the details of the bird in his element. Colours from the bird properly caught. Many details perceptible. Excellent view on the water

Technical achievement

• Excellent focus on the whole bird
• Perfect exposure with an appropriate choice of aperture/speed and iso speed rating for the butterfly
• Perfect depth of field and sharpness for the bird
• Good contrast
• Excellent sharpness showing all the details of the bird; particularly I appreciate to have a good perception of all the details in the green feathers from the neck as well as for all the feathers from the wings.
• Precise white balance and exact colour rendering
• Excellent perception of the movement of the bird on the water through the ripple of water
• Good post processing without any excess
• Good background blur and very pleasant rendering of the sky

Impact

• Interesting picture showing the bird; good capture of this Anas undulata
• Picture presented with simplicity and sobriety – Nothing to disrupt the purpose of the picture
• Efficient framing and composition with an appropriate disposition in a semi panoramic framing.

Thank you for the sharing.

Have a good day.

Philippe

amanengone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 187 W: 54 N: 412] (2113) [2016-12-05 3:17]

Hello Don – Very pleasant picture of this stormy sky. Excellent, view showing us all the details of the sky, the clouds and the flash of lightning coming from or going to the sea. Excellent and dramatic colours giving a good idea of the situation.

Technical achievement

• Excellent focus on the subject (sea, clouds, flash of lightning)
• Perfect exposure with an appropriate choice of aperture/speed and iso speed rating
• Perfect depth of field and sharpness
• Good contrast
• Excellent sharpness showing good details from the clouds and a good perception of the lightning
• Precise white balance and exact colour rendering of the dramatic scene
• Good post processing without any excess

Impact

• Interesting picture showing a dramatic scene of lightning; good capture
• Good presentation with simplicity
• Efficient framing and composition with an appropriate disposition

Thank you for the sharing.

Have a good day.

Philippe

amanengone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 187 W: 54 N: 412] (2113) [2016-12-05 3:03]

Hello Lavan – Very pleasant picture of this Panthera tigris. Excellent, view showing us all the details of the tiger under the shade of the trees. Colours properly caught. Many details perceptible.

Technical achievement

• Excellent focus on the subject
• Perfect exposure with an appropriate choice of aperture/speed and iso speed rating
• Perfect depth of field and sharpness
• Good contrast
• Excellent sharpness showing good details from the coat of the tiger
• Precise white balance and exact colour rendering
• Good post processing without any excess
• Good background and pleasant rendering of the nearby schrubs

Impact

• Interesting picture showing this tiger in his natural element; good capture
• Good presentation with simplicity
• Efficient framing and composition with an appropriate disposition; maybe could it have be better to show us the entire tiger, including his tail, instead to show us only a small part of it.

Thank you for the sharing.

Have a good day.

Philippe

amanengone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 187 W: 54 N: 412] (2113) [2016-12-04 8:52]

Hello Roland – Very pleasant picture of this confrontation between those two insects; it is not frequent to see that. Excellent, view showing us all the details of the two insects in full flight. Colours properly caught. Many details perceptible. Excellent view on the sky

Technical achievement

• Excellent focus on the subject: insects as well as flower
• Perfect exposure with an appropriate choice of aperture/speed and iso speed rating
• Perfect depth of field and sharpness
• Good contrast
• Excellent sharpness showing good details of the insects
• Precise white balance and exact colour rendering for the butterfly
• Excellent perception of the movement of the insects in the sky around the flower and excellent rendering of the opened wings
• Excellent rendering of the movement of the insects
• Good post processing without any excess
• Good background and pleasant rendering of the sky

Impact

• Interesting picture showing both the insects; good capture
• Good presentation with simplicity
• Efficient framing and composition with an appropriate disposition

Thank you for the sharing.

Have a good day.

Philippe

amanengone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 187 W: 54 N: 412] (2113) [2016-12-04 8:43]

Hello Alain – Very good picture of this Chen caerulescens. Excellent, view showing us all the details of the bird in full flight. Colours from the bird properly caught. Many details perceptible. Excellent view on the sky

Technical achievement

• Excellent focus on the whole bird
• Perfect exposure with an appropriate choice of aperture/speed and iso speed rating for the butterfly
• Perfect depth of field and sharpness for the bird
• Good contrast
• Excellent sharpness showing all the details of the bird; particularly I appreciate to have a good perception of all the details in the white feathers as well as in the black one; it is not very easy to get that result
• Precise white balance and exact colour rendering for the butterfly
• Excellent perception of the movement of the bird in the sky and excellent rendering of the opened wings
• Good post processing without any excess
• Good background blur and very pleasant rendering of the sky

Impact

• Interesting picture showing the bird; good capture of this Chen caerulescens.
• Good presentation with simplicity
• Efficient framing and composition with an appropriate disposition on the left side of the frame. Maybe a panoramic framing will have been better.

Thank you for the sharing.

Have a good day.

Philippe

amanengone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 187 W: 54 N: 412] (2113) [2016-12-04 7:34]

Hello Luciano – Very good picture of this Lycaena tytirus. Excellent, view showing us all the details of the butterfly, wings and head. Colours from the butterfly properly caught. Many details perceptible. Unusual point of view, very attractive.

Technical achievement

• Excellent focus on the whole butterfly even if the back wings are not perfectly neat.
• Perfect exposure with an appropriate choice of aperture/speed and iso speed rating for the butterfly
• Perfect depth of field and sharpness for the butterfly (except for the back wings)
• Good contrast
• Excellent sharpness showing all the details of the butterfly; particularly at the level of the wings, all the details of the ornamentation are perceptible
• Precise white balance and exact colour rendering for the butterfly
• Excellent lighting that I appreciate particularly
• Good post processing without any excess
• Good background blur

Impact

• Interesting picture showing the butterfly gathering nectar on the flower; good capture of this Lycaena tytirus.
• Good presentation with simplicity
• Efficient framing and composition with an appropriate disposition in the centre of the frame
• Excellent and unusual point of view.

Thank you for the sharing.

Have a good day.

Philippe

amanengone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 187 W: 54 N: 412] (2113) [2016-12-04 7:18]

Hello Luciano – Very good picture of this Melitae phoebe. Excellent, view showing us all the details of the butterfly, his wings and head. Colours from the butterfly properly caught. Many details perceptible. Through your picture and the aspect of the wings, we understand that is is the end of life for this butterfly (which is normal at the end of the summer).

Technical achievement

• Excellent focus on the whole butterfly
• Perfect exposure with an appropriate choice of aperture/speed and iso speed rating for the butterfly
• Perfect depth of field and sharpness for the butterfly
• Good contrast
• Excellent sharpness showing all the details of the butterfly; particularly at the level of the wings, all the details of the ornamentation are perceptible
• Precise white balance and exact colour rendering for the butterfly
• Excellent lighting that I appreciate particularly
• Good post processing without any excess
• Good background blur

Impact

• Interesting picture showing the butterfly gathering nectar on the flower; good capture of this Melitae phoebe.
• Good presentation with simplicity
• Efficient framing and composition with an appropriate disposition in the centre of the frame; maybe could you have removed the leaf at the bottom of the frame (by reframing).

Thank you for the sharing.

Have a good day.

Philippe

amanengone Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 187 W: 54 N: 412] (2113) [2016-12-04 7:03]

Hello Luciano – Very good picture of this Agraulis vanillae. Excellent, view showing us all the details of the butterfly, his wings, body and head. Colours from the butterfly properly caught. Many details perceptible.

Technical achievement

• Excellent focus on the whole butterfly
• Perfect exposure with an appropriate choice of aperture/speed and iso speed rating for the butterfly
• Perfect depth of field and sharpness for the butterfly
• Good contrast
• Excellent sharpness showing all the details of the butterfly; particularly at the level of the wings, all the details of the ornamentation are perceptible
• Precise white balance and exact colour rendering for the butterfly
• Good post processing without any excess
• Good background blur

Impact

• Interesting picture showing the butterfly; good capture of this Agraulis.
• Good presentation with simplicity
• Efficient framing and composition with an appropriate disposition in the centre of the frame.

Thank you for the sharing.

Have a good day.

Philippe