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Sparrows, Sparrows, Sparrows


Sparrows, Sparrows, Sparrows
Informação sobre a Foto
Direitos de Autor: Pam Russell (coasties) Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 3749 W: 483 N: 8155] (28054)
Género: Animals
Meio: Cor
Data da Foto: 2004-12-08
Categorias: Birds
Câmara: Canon EOS 10D, Canon EF 70-200mm f4 L USM
Exposição: f/4.5, 1/250 segundos
Versão da Foto: Versão Original, Workshop
Data de Submissão: 2004-12-08 4:36
Visto: 3659
Pontos: 12
[Notas - Normas] Nota do Artista
More practice shots. I welcome as much advice as you want to give.
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That's a good composition, what lens are you using? Except of the noise I don't see anything to change.
Points tomorrow.

Very good series Pam and nice poses in all three. The colours look very natural and I like the tight cropping. However there are some noise in the pictures - could come from over-sizing. The noise in this case is easy to remove in Neat Image so I dare to make a WS to show you - hope it is OK. You can find some usable links about noise reduction and Neat Image on my intro-site. I will give the 2 point for the effort.

The background is a bit noisy on the large version, which you could fix with NeatImage - its free.
Apart from that it's a nice composition of a common species. Its well framed and you can see all the features needed to identify it.

Very nice Pam.
There are some noise , what ISO did you use.
I own a 10d and I use up ISO 400 without noise.
I think Mogens is right , maybe over-sizing.
Anyway nice post.
Well done.

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  • willie Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 1023 W: 61 N: 648] (2083)
  • [2004-12-08 12:25]

Nice presentation Pam. Your new camera is really doing the job. Keep posting

Hi Pam, for me to give advice you should post some more info in your note. The info is called Exif or metadata and the camera usually writes it in the photo. If you select properties in most photoviewers or editors you will see it. The facts I really need are the following; the lens you use, did you use a flash and/or tri-pod, time of day, weather conditions and focal lenght. When we have this info we can make an informed recommendation.

If you have any problems extracting the info drop me a mail I will help you with it.

It's a great camera, the qulity of the shots should be very good.

Anyway... it's a nice set of shots and testing like you do will pay off handsomely. Stick to it.

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  • livios Gold Star Critiquer/Gold Star Workshop Editor/Gold Note Writer [C: 2150 W: 319 N: 4263] (16942)
  • [2005-04-24 18:18]

Pam, nice composition(s).

The bird is one of the most common around the world, but it is no problem at all showing them.

I myself have been trying a good sparrow shot for quite a long time, but, so far, I wasn't successful.

As for your photo, I also like the greenish bg in them.

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